I am a 16-year-old student with Aspergers Syndrome, with a bit of a knack for rhyme and rhythm! I am currently studying A-levels, of which my strongest is English literature. So, with all due haste upon finding this site, I registered and published some of my poetry. I do indeed welcome criticism (for if my poetry is not of sufficient quality, people should point it out in order that I improve!) , but only of the constructive kind!
Gnarled bark and bitter leaf
Guard well the forest deep
And by the thorns, their tearing teeth
The shadows like to skulk and creep.
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Let rip the dogs of war!
And loose the rattling guns
Charge head into the gaping maw
'Till blood on the battlefield runs.
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Thum-dum rolls the drum
Beating the beat of marching men
Thum dum rolls the drum
How many men will march again
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Late one night I lay awake,
The storm it battered and blew,
When suddenly, over the lake,
A strange thing flew.
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Red is blood, sweet Aphrodite.
And weak is the flesh that it feeds
For this I beg of thee: unsmite me!
Passion is red; and so is the heart that it bleeds.
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