excellent poems. you are great in explaining your feels. i invite you to read my poem
you are a truly great poet, someone who should be in the all time top 500 poets here on poemhunter
the rosy lay is brilliant, no more words needed, just brilliant, thank you
the rosy lay beautiful poem Yash, well written just perfect, thank you
sonnet III what a remarkable poem, brilliant rhyme and flow, Thank you Yash
Yash...A new poet/critic is in the process of making, and the pace is quite fast...an imaginative, creative present is paving the way for an active, bright future! best wishes!
The red soil of Madhya Pradesh has always been very fertile. I remember poems of Sarojini Naidu, now I shall remember Yash as well.
The red soil of Madhya Pradesh has always been very fertile. I remember poems of Sarojini Naidu, now I shall remember Yash as well.
The red soil of Madhya Pradesh has always been very fertile. I remember poems of Sarojini Naidu, now I shall remember Yash as well.
The red soil of Madhya Pradesh has always been very fertile. I remember poems of Sarojini Naidu, now I shall remember Yash as well.
The red soil of Madhya Pradesh has always been very fertile. I remember poems of Sarojini Naidu, now I shall remember Yash as well.
Still, I can't believe that Yash is just a boy of sixteen....! His outpourings as a poet (though not much in number) and more particularly his critique amaze and astound me... I wish this 'infant prodigy' all success....! ! !
Amazing. simply a school boy can have so much maturity and powerful skill of writing. Certainly he is an outstanding. He is the rising sun of poetry. I wish him all success.
lil bro, just read your poems.. I'm in love with your words.. Always keep the wonderful talent growing.. You are an amazing poet.. Gudluck :)
Yash is really a very great poet...! he just don't writes but copy the emotions from his heart...! i love his style very much...!
I am amazed with the quality of your writings at such a tender age. You are god-gifted.. All the best.
The best way to create a poem is through your experiences and your emotions. Your works clearly shows that you have the ability to apply both in your writings very well. And for someone so young, you have a lifetime ahead of you to hone this gift and reach even greater heights. I wish you all the best. Sincerely Philo Yan
Dear Yash, You are very talanted poet, I hope you keep writing, as I'am sure your abilties will grow ever greater with the passing years.
Hi Yash, apologies for the delay in getting back to you, I read your poems and the only advice I would give to you is keep writing the way you do, '' I Carved Your Name In My Heart '' is a beatiful expression of love and contentment. As you are still young you must look at developing your own style of writing and you can only do this by experimenting with words and feelings that come from within your soul. One tip I would give to any writer is to keep a pen and paper as a constant companion by your side as ideas and words will hit you anytime and anywhere and if not written down at that moment they could be gone forever. As for improving your language I would have to say that is for us to improve on rather than you I can only speak one language and in Britain even that causes problems with our regional accents. You will find that by looking objectively at every poem you write and read you will feel the urge to make your next one even better, just keep writing and learning as you go and you will meet your goal. When you have a talent such as yours you just need to nurture it carefully, never be afraid to experiment with different styles and don't ever be afraid of criticism, there are those who criticise just for the sake of it and others who are genuine in what they say, utilise all comments regardless of type to make your next writings even better. God bless and good wishes for the future. Bri Mar Bri Mar
Yash Shinde is an excellent poet.Reading his write is a beautiful experience.The way he expresses his feelings and thought is remarkable.