Yami Tenshi Comments

From reading your collection of poems it strikes me that you have suffered much tragedy in your life. I am a huge admirer of your work and wait on tender hooks to read more but just a small hint of criticism. You write lovely rhyming poems and it would be nice for you to do something happy. Have a look at my poem 'My Second Home' to get an idea. I am not much of a rhyming writer so bare with me! ! Leave a comment about what you thought... Yours Aye Thomas Vaudin