Age: 16
Pen name: Vi Lanflagle
recently i have had a slight writers block. i've written very little to nothing in the past almost 6 months. this is due to a very sudden move and a lack of inspiration. i'm hoping that its slowly unblocking, but i can't say for sure. i appreciate any constructive criticism and feedback you can give.
thank you for your time: D
~Vi
one more thing...i have seen my poetry used and i must say that i don't mind at all. i only ask two things...first that i am notified of its use and second that i am given credit for writing it. these are my words...please don't abuse them.
Sonnet #1
I’m not quite sure how to write a sonnet
So I’ll start with just a few simple lines.
If I correctly write this sonnet
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Why do people lie
And say they’re happy
When really inside
They’re collapsing.
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Whole life's a lie
Don't know what's real anymore.
Can't trust anyone
I don't know anybody or anything.
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