I suppose I can be short on this one.
I'm just a teenage girl, with a wish to write proper poetry some day. I'm planning on using this page to see what your opinion is on the attempts I make at that. As I'm still young, I guess my subjects can be a bit childish and all, but anyway...
Any (constructive) criticism is welcome!
Just another face, but different
Everlasting beauty lies in it
For one so friendly and kind
For one so cold but yet divine
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Time stops whenever I see you
Heaven nor hell comes close as description
Of how I feel, even when you hate me too
My addiction
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Gliding, falling, to a new depth
Reaching out for new stars
Eyes that make me shake
Giving away luck again
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Forever you'll be with me
Taking part of my memories, a dark past
To forget, to neglect and deny
It's easier that way, to live a lie
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