you write very well Tony keep up the gr8 work thanks for sharing.
You have good ideas but you need to expand a bit.Don't be afraid to use words-that's your voice in your poems..poetry is more than just feelings and images..it's reaching inward so you can grab the reader's attention outwardly...watch your punctuation and spelling...mostly remember we each have our own unique voice and preferences.Good luck! ! ! !
Tony Miller, ..in my ideas, you've got a perfect soul man. i just have found your great poetry. bless. hope to see your progressing all the time. Ellias Anderson.