tanvi damle Comments

So many love and heart break poems, you and Adele would get along well.

I think this poem is excellent. It rhymes and flows. The very way I like reading poetry. Good Job

Well, the lines are really overflow of your powerful emotions, sensitivity and sensibility. It seems to me you could not recollect the ideas/feelings completely at the time of writing. True picture of the Waste land is here. Love to read next.

lot of hidden meanings......good write.......deep thinking.....i like it.....

I like your poems. Keep on writing

Great Writing - Thank you for sharing!

that was cool i like how you use that song say good bye