A new 17 years old poet who has wriiten poems for a few weeks is yearning for the comments.
Only by the constructive comments, can I write better.
The more comment I receive, the better I will write.
Over 50 Million brothers are
all over the world,
being dragged to the right angle,
without giving a word.
...
I have battled with him
indiviually in my bed.
But he is so strong that
defeats me and makes me sad.
...
A blue and secret flower
is somehow attractive and cool.
It is charming that
I become a fool.
...
Liverpool
It is a symbol of warrior.
No betrayer, no fear.
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