This is another instance of creating a beautiful poem. Keep reading and composing. Thanks for the effort.
You made your debut effort successful dear poet, starting with a very delicate topic. Your description is amazing. Keep reading in addition to composing. Thanks for the nice poem.
Your debut effort shows the hidden poetic talent in you. The path of poetry is surely a golden one. I wish you would excel in getting there, in the front bench of this zone. Of course you would require a good deal of reading great poets old, modern and classical- each one will contribute to your poetic potency. Thanks a lot Surath for this benevolent attempt.
Your contribution to the world of poetry as a teenager is immense. I wish every success in your poetic walk ahead.