I'd like some constructive criticism. Not that I don't appreciate the good things that have been said. :) I write about what I'm thinking of. Speaking of what I think... I believe the best thing that could happen to one of my poems is that someone actually prints it out and hangs it in their house or, someone memorizes one... That would be, amazing. But, that's probably just 'wishful thinking.' Hmm... Let's see, I'm eighteen years old... I love rock music, Skillet, Hollywood Undead, White Zombie... tons of others too... Meh, don't know what else to say right now, undoubtedly I'll think of something later when I can't get on, I'll see about writing more some other time.
Why are you so weak?
Isn't religion just a crutch...
Can you not deal with problems yourself?
Must you rely on everyone but yourself...
...
Everyday we spend seperated...
each night we can't talk,
seems forever and a half.
An oasis being the day
...
My love for you is like no other.
My heart is ablaze with an intensity
that none before could set
nor none after will be able to again,
...
I want your love,
I want your devotion.
That's all I ask for,
It's all I could wish for.
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