My love for expression leads me to write. As a young man, my quest for connection and wisdom has created a powerful need to write my thoughts down and have them shared with others. I am only a beginner in these attempts.
Please critique my work with a true heart and clear mind. Your thoughts are gold to me.
Thank you.
Behold the beauty.
Problems have their purpose.
We've divided ourselves,
We've battled with disease,
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Blank pages with no writing
Blank faces with no lighting
Your time is now and you sit aloud amongst the chairs of chance
When every choice you make in your life is left in god’s hands
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I used to feel something in my chest
Now it feels empty; nothing is left
All of life connected; All a big test
As if a trial to see who can live the longest
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Do you see this?
Because I continue to stare
It seems we aren't grateful of presence
When strangers remain being strangers
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