Skylar Beet Comments

Louis Kasatkin 07 January 2012

Dark-It was good of you to provide guidance for yopur reader in the footnote.The tone and style of this poem reminded me of the narrative songs of The Hold Steady.Urban alienation etc. The only editorial advice I can give is try and avoid extended lines, stick to 6 words per line.

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Skylar Beet 04 January 2012

What do you think? :) hoped you liked it :) THANKS for reading

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