u know I picked your poem for creative text practice and my freinds loved it. nami ngiythandile uyshayile mngan wam thank you.
Before Time step into another minutes to change hours and remove date of Jan31st from 2012...I will crave a statue, with my words to honor my friend Siya, Happy Birthday To You..may your spirit and hope still strong in time..your fight for your nation just so remarkable...one day people will come and visit this statue, to come and Praise you...Rise Africa Rise...Even i am far away for the land but i can see the light landing over there...In poetry rhyme, and spiritful lines..Keep writing Siya..for all humanity sake, rise and never drown when you fall...float and fly like a phoenix! keep it up Bday boy! _Unwritten Soul
I like that! - nicely written.