I'm 13. I love poetry and I also enjoy reading poems. Please comment on my poems, Thank you :)
                School is where one learns, 
Kowledge is what one earns, 
Teachers, friends are a part of school, 
Without them, a school, isnt a school,
                
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                Chocolate cake, 
Peacefully baked, 
Chocolate dripping down from the cake, 
Oh! My life at stake,
                
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                Happiness is a deep feeling, 
All the sorrows that are healing, 
Makes you feel alright, 
Although you recently had a fight,
                
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                People have some gifts gifted by god, 
For them people applaud, 
A talent, that is, 
It is a great fizz,
                
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                Summer holidays are sweet, 
An irresistable treat, 
It's all about fun, 
Playin' under the sun,
                
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