Sameer Ahmed Comments

Your Poem 'An Ocean Within ' in respect of your father, shows the insight of his life along with your worries about old age quite nicely. Your narration that he still has dreams shows the lively spirit within him and the journey he has been through and will surely carry on> > > > > .jbbztip ******

Your Poem 'An Ocean Within ' in respect of your father, shows the insight of his life along with your worries about old age quite nicely. Your narration that he still has dreams shows the lively spirit within him and the journey he has been through and will surely carry on.jobztip

Your Poem 'An Ocean Within ' in respect of your father, shows the insight of his life along with your worries about old age quite nicely. Your narration that he still has dreams shows the lively spirit within him and the journey he has been through and will surely carry on.

Sameer, this poem brings tears to my eyes..so well put and inspiring. its like i feel your strong gesture to ur father...he is your back bone and therefore..u needed to create something for him..I'm sure he is proud of a talented poet..Congrats my friend

WAKE UP.Its a wonderful piece AMIRA