Honest comments will do.
Mukthi as the end; you are at the front.
O mother O mother all are on the run.
Renunciation as the means; all else are only dreams.
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We are not becoming purer; We are already that.
We are not becoming free; We are already that.
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With your play rehearsed,
I got immersed.
With no yearning,
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It all started with a platonic relationship.
Slowly turning into a courtship.
The heart is swaying the mind.
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