I am now on a few poetry sites as i think this a way forward for poets no longer are we a few here and there. there are many of us and we will all work to help each other for better poetry.
I am enjoying my time on this site, i think i writing a lot better but only you can tell me.
Sitting on a balcony
over looking the city
gray lifeless, out to sea
the first rays of light.
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She smiled
her elmond eyes
turned at the edge.
A warm glow, came from her.
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