My name is Rachael Hardy I am 20 years of age...I started writing at the age of 16. I love writing. I find I tell a story through my writing. It also helps me express my feelings. Please help me 2 better my art by commenting on my poems*all would be nice*...negative criticism would also do me good. I am open to anything you have to say...Thank You
I would rather die than cry
I fear my father hates me
Not sure if my mother cares
She says she loves because she has to
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Despise the eyes with tears
Resent the heart with fears
Beaten and reluctant
To hear the repeated words
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What makes you think my passion is the same
I feel like an undesirable burning flame
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Heart filled with love
Heart filled with fire
To have her one dream
Her inner most desire
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Damage has been done
Time cannot be erased
The frown you placed on her face cannot be replaced
Hurt caused by your selfishness
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