Zzzzzzzzzz... The Mermaid And The Sailor...Thanks Comments

Hi TAMARA - A very interesting poem. Is it a poem? (in the srtictest sense of the word) or what the French call UNE POESIE MERCI - 'A Thank You Poem'. We all love 'un message de merci' a thank-you letter so for that reason (I know I am on your thank you list) I have put a TEN in the box and improved the average to 8.2! What are you saying to us? THANK YOU...................... For all who commented and inspired (that should be the essence of Poemhunters) For that sailor (some of us have come back to the Island for you!) For who let my tears fall (we catch your tears!) For who felt me (all your friends feel for you - in sadness and joy!) Being able to reach and share - in your thoughts and aching heart beats That is the essence and d raison d'etre of all Poemhunter Friends Because we love your poems (and you) we will always be there for you commenting and voting. Thank you for your THANK YOUS - JOHN

You have to face all difficulties to achieve your aim and u done it congrats 10 pluss

awwww...my dear friend thats really sweet. i think you touch a lot of people keep writing^^

very interesting if you get the time please stop by my page and comment on some of my poems thank you have a nice day

a fine moving piece indeed! You are endowed with wisdom! 10+

We too thank you for sharing ur talent with us................

You know how I feel about your poetry. You have a gift that is GOD given. I will always be true in telling you my thoughts in private... and of corse I will read all the 'new' marked ones!

A very unusual and somehow deeply moving poem I'll read some more of your work when I get the time jim

very tender...full of humility and gratefulness I love your writes.... you deserve it... words to melt our hearts.... lovelots, maia

TaMaRa...Simple sweet and humbles one..You know?

Don't mention it, you deserve it. I'd say again, you're a great poet and a writer rolled into one. Enjoy the glory.

Dearest Tamara A little Gem AS always full of sparkle

Dear TAMARA, This is a heart-felt rendition of feelings from none other than HANARING with her magical words in prose leaving much to rhymes and imaging. Rajkumar I'm back and able to read rate and comment. Please communicate to others. A thought-provoking emotional poem on the back dropp of an expecting sailor. Good write short and sweet.

some one so sweet put for me a mark of hate, , don't know if it was zero..or minus zero..it is his right to rate..by the way..there was no need to rate this peice as it was not a poem...sure he or she will visit here and i will be waiting here to welcome you

short and sweet, leaves most to the imagination, well done

dear Tamara, Ameerul qawafi geeto mobayean Wahathi gomool sheri qad jaat maai You are Ameerul Qawafi with no doubt.

How touching this silent little peace maker- you write so gracefully

You are a welcome's warm whisper You are a whisper's wifi wizard You are a wizard's woes wrapped swapped and clapped in emotion's eerie string You are Tamara Jay Hanaring

Hi Tamara, Sure, its real feelings and deep emotions. this good tril for yorself to know what you have from reach love inside you. Wrtite and write don't stop.V.good. S.E

I am surprised how visual this poem in its shortness... my interpretation was along the same lines of Dr. subhendu Kar and thus I feel empty when trying to reach for a non-generic comment, but alas. Very nice, Tamara.