Zzzzzzz Darling Computer, Please Come Alive! Comments

This is a very sweet piece and one which many of us here on this site will relate to. Addictive they are, these instruments of our creative souls and you're right, they are almost alive. I did enjoy this poem. Very expressive. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

It seems a bit metaphorical... Maybe I'm over analyzing. Very good. Kadie

Preets...A MOST COPIOUSLY CREATIVE& WIT-DRIVEN PIECE...I LOVE IT ALL BASIC PRINCIPALS OF POETRY ADHERED TO & WITH GREAT SUCCESS...TAKE A CURTAIN CALL ON THIS ONE YOUNG LADY, YOU'VE EARNED IT! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

and you say you are running out of ideas...that was great preets...dont we all love our computers! ! ! ...nalini

Preets, loved it! It made me smile and yet it was so poetic! This is my favourite one so far....keep sharing please! Many smiles, Aisha x

Yes....agree with Vikram....my laptop = my life hahahahahaha Great funny poem - written well Take care, Dona

Classy and comedic - analogy carried all the way through - a fine fun read.

Shows how dependent we have become on computers, even i go mad when something happens to my laptop.