Monday, July 10, 2006

Zzzzzz ‘beware’ation Comments

Rating: 3.0

Sharing a life together
In your marital bliss (or bliss was never?)
You kiss her before going to office.
She cooks for you, does all the washing
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.Pd. is here
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Catastrophe King 29 August 2006

Since, I did not find any new poems written and launched by you today - i decided to read one of your older ones and came across this one. First of all.... a 10 here! I agree with Amber here that it truly is an interesting subject to write on and that you did it so early is so much more admirable. The wordings are excellent and you did deserve this long journey as a poet... God Bless You! !

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Abigail Keller 15 July 2006

Hey, I really liked this poem. Interesting subject and extremely great wording. ~Amber~

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Gina Onyemaechi 14 July 2006

A humorous/serious piece of writing. And thanks for your comment on my poem, Preeti. Best wishes, Gina.

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IT EXISTS NOW, & WITH YOUR COPYRIGHT TO WEBSTER ON IT DEAR PREETS! I LIKE IT TOO...HEY, ITS POETRY...IF YOU WRITE IT...IT COUNTS..TIS ALL..NICE STORY, PRETI, ANOTHER JOB VERY WELL DONE! FRANK/FJR

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