Zzzzz Alone Comments

A good work.... a definite 10/10 from me. Just wanted to ask... did the friend fly in? ? ? ?

Wonderful poem to say the least. I'm very impressed by the style of your writing.

A wonderful elegy Preeti and the worst thing in the life is the loneliness, a good omen of a poetess.

WOW! The title of ur poem is aptly justified.Truly...life is like a black n white photo without friends.I am lucky to have some great friends....n i wish that u end up finding some..in fact lots soon.

a sad one preets...friends are a luxuary now a days...today when the AC and mobile are common stuff...love...nalini

Does that mean all I can do is moan and groan And nevertheless be on my own - ALL ALONE? If we are alone in an island surrounded by the sea, then we should feel like this. But we are in the city and to make friends there are many. But all cannot become friends. A friend in need is a friend indeed. A nice poem indeed.

So sad =(! ! ! Pretti, this is another wonderful poem! Your writing is captavating and I enjoy each and everyone that I am honored to read! Again a 10! Definately will be reading more and more! Keep em' commin'! =) HUGS! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Kristin Davis~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

i liked some of the images/language you used here