Zzzz Confession Comments

I was going thru ur poems and was reading this... but I do not why I re-read it again and again.... I feel and can imagine the way you fell whilst writing this one... there is pain... but I admire the way you have painted them with your words....10/10

DATPREETS A PREETI ARTFUL POET.....'' YOU ARE NO LONGER SYNONOMOUS WITH ME ''...AWESOME LINE...BETTER GET A COPYRT. 'FORE ME STEALS IT 30 YRS. FROM NOW WHENCE YIR NOT ' LOOKIN' ME WAY...GREAT WRITE...IO!

Beautiful expression of sadest emotions, good work from an young mind. Good wishes.

Strong sentiment and a fair write. I found the switch to lazy words (coz and outta) to be grating as they just seemed out of context to the rest of the piece. Also there seemed to be a good rythym going with the first verse but that then seemed to vanish. Still a good work overall. Cheers.