Thursday, January 1, 2004

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Rating: 3.5

Here on the pale beach, in the darkness;
With the full moon just to rise;
They sit alone, and look over the sea,
Or into each other's eyes. . .
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Conrad Potter Aiken
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Michelle Claus 02 April 2014

Intriguing scene and story, but I don't like the final line. It reduces the emotional swell.

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Conrad Potter Aiken

Conrad Potter Aiken

Savannah, Georgia
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