Thursday, August 27, 2015

Zucker Fuß Comments

Rating: 4.5

If i was a toy
given as a gift to Zucker Fuß
Out of Love
on Her Berfday
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stephanie mellisa kievaughan
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Edward Kofi Louis 08 September 2016

Out of love. Thanks for sharing.

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Stephani Kievaughan 23 September 2015

Zucker Fuß Translates to Sugar foot from German just so you all will know. it rhymed really well so i went with it

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Della Perry 23 September 2015

I was thinking of a forgotten toy on a shelf, as I read, and also of how as a poet we are overlooked by others, I often call myself Mrs Nobody, or Mrs Invisible, it is good to find a place where we can share our passion for writing with like minded people who care enough to put thoughts into the written word too. Computers and internet have made it possible to have many online friends but ones we would possibly never meet or know properly, which can also make you feel lonely in the real world I guess. Catch 22 good poetry.

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Stephani Kievaughan 14 February 2016

thank you so much for taking the time to analyze and extract thoughts my writing provoked. your doing so much more than just reading my poems. that is highly appreciated thank you

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Liza Sudina 19 September 2015

Very sincere, young and intimate lines! you are strong! ! ! And ponder and wonder why she would never draw me close If she could ever love me the most if she thinks of me

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Kim Barney 07 September 2015

Fascinating and very well written.

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Kelly Kurt 27 August 2015

An enchanting poem, Melissa.

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Stephani Kievaughan 14 February 2016

I'll have you know another poem of mine has been posted. i hope to hear your review of it soon. I hope this response finds you all well, and good.

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