Wednesday, November 8, 2006

Zoo Visit Comments

Rating: 5.0

Zoo visits can be lots of fun
with your young daughter or your son,
unless you cannot understand
the child whose hand is in your hand.
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gershon hepner
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Bri Edwards 30 December 2012

i enjoyed the parts re pythons, baboons, and giraffes, and meerkats, bears, and rhinos/hippos. i really enjoyed the end section dealing with children. i DO think you left we out midway through the last section. thanks for sharing.

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Linda Hepner 22 November 2006

A 10 from me and a good reminiscent laugh! ~~ L, L.

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Francesca Johnson 08 November 2006

Ha ha enjoyed this, Gershon. Loved the end part, tongue-in-cheek as it was (I think? ?) and the part where the hippo runs off if you say 'Shoo' - wouldn't like to test that out myself! Enjoyable phraseology throughout, too. Love, Fran xx

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