Tuesday, June 21, 2005

Zipher Of Land Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shant not the world be covered in death, vague, cruel, and forbidden.
I toil, and scrape the land beneath my feet, yet nothing grows.
I water, and water, but the ground stays dry.
I seed the earth, but nothing lives.
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Velmar Pewee Hale Johnson
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Herbert Nehrlich1 21 June 2005

This is very good. Reminds me of the words from the great Indian Chief that the city of Seattle was named after. I love the feel of this. Please add a 'y' to the in line seven. Thanks Herbert

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Velmar Pewee Hale Johnson

Velmar Pewee Hale Johnson

Ripley, Tennessee
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