Friday, May 23, 2008

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You can not tell people
Who have been trapped and raise on crap.
That they are also ignorant, fat and lazy!
Since those that are...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Bri Edwards 29 December 2012

lawrence, i was about to move on to a different poet when i read this. i am very glad i found it. not only is it funny (admit it, you thought it was funny didn't you?) , but it gives good advice to some people who may not stop to think before speaking or people who are just mean. i'll stick this in my mypoemlist. thanks for sharing. bri

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Wayne Bowen 17 January 2010

I enjoyed your poem..We all have faults and we all seem to have comments about others if we do not have their problem! Wayne

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