Zindagi-Ek Paheli Comments

Such a beautiful poem my friend. Why don't you write?

An excellent poem. Keep writing

Ye zindagi hai ek intihan yaaron, Yaha Kuch palo ka hisab kya rakhein... Dear Poet Bharat, A very beautiful poem in Hindi. So well written with a wonderful content and language. For the first poem, it is simply superb! .....a full score for you........10

Your first poem, as you say, and I would rate it highly. Keep writing dear budding poet. Good you have used the Roman script, but Hindi/DevaNagari script could also be used.

A beautiful poem... delightful poetic expression! Loved reading it.......10/10

Well-done my friend.keep it

Kya bat hai..ek no line hai

Write comment. Such a beautiful start, Jagwani. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

Lajwaab bhai

Awsome poem brother..keep writing such poems👍👍

Nice poetry dear... Superb lines

Nice poem... Really heart touching..

Sir kis line me agye ap