ye hamari zindagi ke panne...
kavi bikhre, kavi simte...
tufano ke thapedon me...
kavi tute, kavi sambhle...
...
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Very beautifully written. Loved to read again and again...
Ati sunder bhavnaapoorn abhivaykti. Meri post PYAR pr aane ke liye haardik dhanyvaad :)
waah bahuth khoob..lajavab ahai... bus ek chota sa dought youn samjho ki aap to chand poems me 'kavi likha hai jiska meanig poet hai...mujhe lagta hai ki shayad aap ka matlab kabhi se hai... ye hamari zindagi ke panne... kavi bikhre, kavi simte... tufano ke thapedon me... kavi tute, kavi sambhle.. please dont mind just i need to clear my dought...
awsome poem 10++ ye hamari zindagi ke panne... kavi bikhre, kavi simte... tufano ke thapedon me... kavi tute, kavi sambhle...10++++
Hi Kavita, Yeh hamari zindagi ke panne kabhee bikhare, kabhee simte Beautiful pen! Good poetry. Congrats. Thanks for sharing..
Vastavikta se parichay karvat zindigi k panne Very well written :)
bas ek kosish ki hai....zindagi ko pannon pe utarne ki.....Rishi Thakkar
Pages of life, very well unfolded......Outstanding poem....Kya baat hai...10+++
An objective portrayal of our struggle in life- so many problems, so much loss, so much negativity. But with faith, conviction and optimism we can change the scenario. Liked it. hai ummid ek jaria... chali hun main jis vaste...
Bohut hi khubsuraat likha hai apne.. Saach me kabhi kabhi hum aise kho jaate hai ke lagta hai phir kabhi milenge hi nahi.. Hum saab se apki is kavita baat ne ke liye sukhriya...
Wonderful poem shared on life that is charismatic. Interesting definitely.
i am preparing to place this Hindi poem in my/our February 2017 showcase, in Section A. It has an English translation by Unnikrishnan E S on PH, entitled It Is Life. this poem is scheduled to appear in Feb.2017's Section C, but Section C is not ready yet, as of today. thanks. bri :)