Wednesday, December 19, 2007

Zihuatenejo Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mellow as a mango.
The women, ages nine to ninety,
always dressed in black.
Lavender breezes and waves
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David Kowalczyk
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I thought I might pick my favorite line and comment on it, but I found it too difficult for this poem, I loved liquid hush, flames and flowers emerging, restless unicorns. Finally, I gave up and I must simply say, lovely, beautiful write. You captured and shared an enchanting moment. Peace, L&T

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Mark Mywords 04 January 2008

You should work for the Mexican Tourism Agency, if you don't already. You capture the spirit of place perfectly.

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David Kowalczyk

David Kowalczyk

Batavia, New York
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