Don’t let anyone hurt you,
Don’t let anyone disrespect you,
Don’t surrender your dignity
For love or money,
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Zeus also had his Achilles' heel - Hera! I think the point is that Everyman is a Hero, so long as he undertakes the Quest. Uriah, you are a pilgrim indeed! - Will
Good message. Achilles had that betraying heel... I'd go with Zeus!
for my own personal choice, I'd go with Hector..good message in this poem, always a pleasure to read your words.
this was comforting Uriah and powerful and optimistic! you own the world and not vice versa! excellent write! ! HBH
You've built me up no end with this one Uriah. I shall stand tall and take on all who want to drag me down. Thanks for such good advice. Loved the poem. Love Ernestine XXX
This is a world class poem, very strong and reassuring. Regards, Sandra Fowler
All power to your pen and strength of character Uriah. A great read. 10 from love is in the air! Tai
Very encouraging! Achilles is an interesting choice, considering his deadly weakness. I wonder if this was intentional? Regards, Lori
What an empowering poem Uriah! You really care for people and that is so wonderful.......and it shines right through in your poems. Sincerely, Mary
A brillant write with a heartwarming message