Friday, January 13, 2006

Zeus Or Achilles Comments

Rating: 4.3

Don’t let anyone hurt you,
Don’t let anyone disrespect you,
Don’t surrender your dignity
For love or money,
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Uriah Hamilton
COMMENTS
Osvaldo Roman 12 May 2008

A brillant write with a heartwarming message

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Will Barber 20 August 2006

Zeus also had his Achilles' heel - Hera! I think the point is that Everyman is a Hero, so long as he undertakes the Quest. Uriah, you are a pilgrim indeed! - Will

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Linda Hepner 24 January 2006

Good message. Achilles had that betraying heel... I'd go with Zeus!

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Amberlee Carter 20 January 2006

for my own personal choice, I'd go with Hector..good message in this poem, always a pleasure to read your words.

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Ivy Christou 17 January 2006

this was comforting Uriah and powerful and optimistic! you own the world and not vice versa! excellent write! ! HBH

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Ernestine Northover 14 January 2006

You've built me up no end with this one Uriah. I shall stand tall and take on all who want to drag me down. Thanks for such good advice. Loved the poem. Love Ernestine XXX

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Sandra Fowler 14 January 2006

This is a world class poem, very strong and reassuring. Regards, Sandra Fowler

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***** ********* 13 January 2006

All power to your pen and strength of character Uriah. A great read. 10 from love is in the air! Tai

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 13 January 2006

Very nice and so powerful! ! !

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Lori Boulard 13 January 2006

Very encouraging! Achilles is an interesting choice, considering his deadly weakness. I wonder if this was intentional? Regards, Lori

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Mary Nagy 13 January 2006

What an empowering poem Uriah! You really care for people and that is so wonderful.......and it shines right through in your poems. Sincerely, Mary

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