Tuesday, January 27, 2009

Zero Sum Game (Italian Sonnet) Comments

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No more shall elms sleep: their ageless sentience
Slows scenes; wisdom’s eternal ecliptic
Brink of man’s mortal event horizon
Resolves: Catharsis of life’s macabre dance
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Greenwolfe 1962 22 February 2009

This is good prose writing once again. It falls short on the poetic side because of the several failed rhymes. But the last line is magical and the images sparkle from the writers pen. GW62

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Aaron Graham

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