Zenith Comments

A great presentation-awe inspiring!

Lovely read Ahmad...beautiful words...thank you

The highs and lows and ups and downs of the paradox called LIFE.Wonderful if I could give 100 tens you would get them for your poetry but all I can do is give you one ten say you've inspired me and I wish I'd written this poem.Good work! ! ! ! ! !

The repetitious use of format and word phrases works very well.

beautiful rhythm with resonating imagery almost takes us on a surreal journey

poets are writing precious verses..... very catchy lines. well done.

this is a very good one, i like how you did it.congratulations...

exquisite Ahmed. this is a highly inspired piece. play on words and beautiful imagery, as Yoonoos comments its poetic zenith itself

this is soul poems, very inspirational zenith is similiar to me

This is a most impressive poem, Ahmad, and a well written one, too. Using the music of Mahler for inspiration is interesting, as he was one of the most poetic of the many great composers. Though a longish poem, it still held the reader's attention thoroughout and had a good and solid ending which complimented the poem very well. I also liked your use of repetition in the poem, too. Carl

Very nostalgic and fine too, I too search that infinite place to breathe leisurely. Your valuable dedication is great.

Though lenthy interestingly descriptive..provokes a second and third reading..more for your wording and style 10

Classic world is a a dilemma: at the same moment it is nostalgic and isn't so.

wordy and nicely written.

Very beautifull and romantic tone.

Very inspiring, very interesting piece. Butd too long verses are out of fashion nowadays..you could make it succinct But I agree this kind of odes need to be long.........however, very good wording.

Thank you for dedicating this eloquent piece to me. The imagery is quite extraordinary. Beautiful work, Ahmad. Warmest regards, Sandra

It's like a beautiful rhythm of a great everlasting song! ! ! ! great write ahmad!