Monday, June 29, 2009

Zeitgeist Comments

Rating: 2.2

A life worth living
A party to enjoy to the hilt
The dams the bridges,
That I built.
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Nikunj Sharma
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Deborah Cromer 24 July 2009

How about 'swirling' dreams in my cup? Is it with in, or within? Within is the way I have always seen it written. I read this before, but don't recall enough of how it was to compare now to how it is. I do know I like this now, but I liked it then too. I think this has improved though! Keep up the good work. DC

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Sadiqullah Khan 29 June 2009

lovely title.10..........

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