Thursday, February 19, 2009

Zebras Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you see a herd of Zebras Being attacked by a lion the lion gets the one it wants and then the rest of the Zebras just stand there watching and dont do anything.

When you go to school you see
Others being punished and teased
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Suzy Paxman
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Brian Jani 08 July 2014

Zebras i like the concept of this poem, well written Suzy

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Kenny Vuong 20 February 2009

I'm telling you, the words speak out for themselves! ! ! !

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Tobias Gray 19 February 2009

this was a poem that deserves much reading! i give it a 10/10! good write! !

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wow now this what I called a poem great work Suzy very open minded and creative spelled all over 10/10

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Channel Sanderson 19 February 2009

Well done! I have two kids in school and this is a very nice poem. I think I'll show it to them when I see them next week.

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Barry A. Lanier 19 February 2009

Such an insightful analogy that you painted in this wonderful poem

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