Tuesday, August 18, 2020

Zameer - Hindi Poemज़मीरconscience Comments

Rating: 5.0

वो जो फिर न आने की क़सम खा के चला गया
वो क्यों लौट आया?

कभी यादों का झोका बन के, कभी टूटे हुए वादों सा
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M. Asim Nehal
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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 August 2020

Fear has come within seeing own shadow but there is no need to gear. Inner conscience carries light of inner soul. Consciousness makes you great. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned...10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 August 2020

yes your own conscience is gnawing at you, then it is no longer fun. But it turned out to be a nice poem, well captured. A 10++++ and much much more!

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T Rajan Evol 18 August 2020

Wo jo Na aNe ki kasam Kha ke Chala Gaya Wo kyun Laut Aaya? Wo nahi jata hum use bhaga dete hain apne karmo se..... Very Said in the end.10

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Raj Rajaram 18 August 2020

डर लगने लगा है अपनी ही परछाई से ये हाल किया है इसने मेरा - " मेरा अपना ज़मीर "

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Sharad Bhatia 18 August 2020

काश मैं तू अपने ज़मीर की सुन लेती एक बार, काश, तू मुझे रोक लेती एक बार।। कितना मतलबी हैं तेरा ज़मीर, जिसने नहीं सुनी मेरी आवाज एक बार।। बेहतरीन 10++

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Varsha M 18 August 2020

Ye zameer he to hai Jo jhoot bolta nahi Chahe sach ketna he Kadwa kyo na ho Himmat bandhata hai bolne me Saath deeta hai usse aankhe chaar karoon Ye zameer he to hai Jo mujhe aacha banata hai Bahri duniya ke chakachound Me goom hone se bachata hai Ye zameer he to hai To hamesha saath deta hai. Beautiful poetry. Thank-you for sharing.

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