Zakhm Hare Hai Abhi Comments

Zakhm agar gehre hon to accha rehta hai, kyunki gehre zakhmon ka asar badi der tak rehta hai....acchi kavita hai...enjoyed reading it.. :)

Be intehaa dard hai aapke lafzon men

Bahut dare hai aapke alfaaz men

हर वह लफ्ज़ ताज़े हैं हमारे दिमाग में हरे हैं अब भी तुमने जो कही सारी बातें a nice write expressing your love for your beloved and how much you miss her - you may next time use the hindi typo for posting hindi scripts for a greater effect: -)

Wah wah kya baat hai, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , Yaadein abhi hai teri mohabaat ki Raatein abhi hai tanhaa,10

Wow it's my first time to read any hindi poem.. English me apne likha isliye may samjha.. It's a heart touching poem.. May mehsus Kiya apko Kavita... Thank you so much dear poet

Achi nazm hai. Nice to read

very touching lines..Har roz unhme aankhon se pani hai dena mujhe Teri hi yadoon me jina.. the deep loss and pain felt by a jilted lover. thanks.

A very passionate love song longing in memory of the loved one and her cruel rejection of lover's advances 10 points.