Monday, November 28, 2016

Zady And Daddy Comments

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Zady was young boy his eyes were beady,
He used to take sugarcane, sweet, and candy.

Once he told his mother and to his daddy,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Mihaela Pirjol 18 September 2018

I very much enjoyed reading this humorous poem in a perfect couplet format matching the subject! I can imagine being recited by a child, and memorised! Beautifully composed!

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 November 2016

Nice rhyme! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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