Wednesday, April 14, 2010

~ Yum-Yum Zero N’ Nil ~ Comments

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~ Yum-Yum Zero n’ Nil ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
April 14,2010
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MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.
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Bri Edwards 28 May 2013

interesting. i was going to stop at one word, but after reading at least parts of all the comments from your many fans i have decided to say more. i don't get it! ! ! ! but it held my interest to the end. you asked me to read one of your new poems and i haven't gotten to 'that one' yet. the ones with 'rape' and 'lingerie' in their titles are ones i feel i want to look at, but i won't be surprised if they surprise me. thanks for sharing, though your poem is not my ''cup of tea'. i DID enjoy reading through the list of titles. to quote a comment left here by another poet: Yummy Yummy for those who understand the fluid nothing. .....but i guess to many readers this poem is more than nothing. bri p.s. maybe you are a genius; i am not.

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Lynn Glover 08 December 2010

A poem meant for all to read. Good write.

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Ravi Sathasivam 06 September 2010

Yum, yum a great write. Well penned. Keep it up Thanks for sharing with me

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David Beckham 01 August 2010

Happy thoughts and happy memories....more melodies for all to dance to. Thanks fr sharing

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Gregory Pierre-jerome 18 June 2010

do you freestyle...lol....your write is catchy i like

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 17 June 2010

feels like i have read this one before but anyway, since I already read all or most of your poems, this reminds me of a theory in school... but that's not important... what's important is that this poem is penned well

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Photode Photode 04 June 2010

‘Yum Yum/ Tension/ Potion/ Option/ Yum Yum’ Well written poet thanks sharing 10+ [tension free] lolol

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Lynn Glover 02 June 2010

Yum, yum a delicious write. keep up the good work. Thanks for the invite. Lynn

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Dr. V. Chakravorty 02 June 2010

Zeroing in other word filling with glitter and gloss and flushing garbage …anxiety state is shrouding in everyone …no vent …but looking for vent …so enjoy anxiety it’ll be at bay 10+ Dr. V

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‘Tension /High extinction /Quotient /Sure n’ Silent.’ Yeah very practical… ‘Burry in bay/Smile away.’…sure smile away … Take lightly …don’t plant tension in head …and nurture by brooding… 10++

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Katang Chakravorty 15 May 2010

Killer Tension…Key in one’s hand…use not ‘Yum-yum zero n’ nil’…here poets want to convey nil = expectation = root cause of dismay and tension = ‘Twine tension in zappy.’ = enjoy tension [no expectation] Lovely poem 10++

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It’s a poem relevant in this days of universal tension Bye bye/Felo-de-se/Yap yippee /Whoopee zippy/Twine tension in zappy. Poet explicitly portrayed tension is ‘Felo-de-se’…to combat it ‘Yap yippee’… Like go without looming of tension and it’s the potion … 10++

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World is exploding not by population but by tension… Frowned face…horizontal / vertical forehead crease … Cordoned smiles… Imprisoned in Hi and Hello… Under time pressure… Is this life…? Slave of sleeping pills…modernity has robbed mainly free mind…what gizmo will do? Prescription is Be dégagé [Free and relaxed in manner] blasé [Nonchalantly unconcerned ] /Enjoy elegant En Masse. Thanks for sharing 10+++

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Amitabha Bagchi 10 May 2010

‘Elision dungeon/Wallow freedom. ‘ Excellent practical hint on stress buster. Freedom and freedom from fear first …every thing will be concurred … Face the tension with ‘smile away’ attitude and enjoy emancipation from buckles of Global Tension 10++ AB London

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 April 2010

kinda like a chant... hahaha.... but of course, this is penned good...

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Carol Gall 26 April 2010

niv i did comment i do not know where it went i had said yum to me means wonderful and this poem is yummy

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Photode Photode 26 April 2010

Stress Buster Stress Cracker Stress Eraser Stress Extinguisher the call of day But how? Pundits have prescribed many psychic exercises and protocols. Poets simplified poetically ‘Elision dungeon/Wallow freedom.’ A type of constant contemplation of antithesis of ‘Wallow freedom’…indeed helpful… Conclusion is ‘Yum-yum zero n’ nil’ …where too much expectation stress ought to become florid and blossoming …sincere work and forget about the result Actually we’re result oriented than work orientation…the basic cause of stress… excellent style and construction…thanks 10++ PO PO

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Bachha Chakravorty 18 April 2010

It’s the bottom line and life line of poem ~ ‘Be dégagé blasé /Enjoy elegant En Masse. Enjoy happiness En masse = in your whole being If you doubt still pay the bill lolol… Very good poetic satire with awareness High extinction Quotient Sure n’ Silent. 10+

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Sadiqullah Khan 16 April 2010

Happy Poila Vaishak 'O Lord, Find no way out amidst The darkness of doubts O Lord of Universe, Manifest Thyself In the luminance Of Love.' [Adapted from R.N.Tagore ~ niv] Prayers and wishes: ‘Sarve Bhavantu Sukina Sarbe Satnu Niramaya’ –Veda [1] ‘Shubho Poila Vaishak Er Shbechha O Priti Janai’ [2] Let all be happy and healthy. [1] Greetings and best wishes of Auspicious Bengali New Year Day. [2] niv

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‘Stress battery batter’ needs buster cracker curber crusher The best is to read poetry to unstrung unshackle unbuckle ‘…Elision dungeon/Wallow freedom…’ most practical way Just omit = ignore and be in wallow [delight] in freedom… Psychologically tailored…this poem Wish you a very happy poetic Poila Vaishak 10++ dr.sakti

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