Saturday, May 19, 2012

Ysa Comments

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Of the Ysa Lands, the green people and the green islands
They were shouting and blaming 'That's My Land!
In the heart of goodness, and the blessing ghosts,
Those people were fighting for the stupid boasts!
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Ellias Anderson Jr.
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Nader Baheri 20 April 2013

great poem Ellias but i am still thinking where this Ysa iland is.~nb

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Bri Edwards 24 February 2013

you sent me a very nice comment re my poem 'Y I Write'. thanks for that. i often then go to the last poem on the list of that poet (you in this case) to sample his/her work. i see you are persian/iranian. how do you manage to have the last name 'anderson'? just wondering. as for this poem: i like poems that tell stories and rhyme, so for those reasons i like it, BUT i do have trouble understanding some of it (quite a bit in fact) , i believe because your english experience is not that of a native-english-speaker. but i applaud you for writing in my native language. i also think you are telling a story many of your readers may be familiar with, which would help them to follow your words. what do you mean by rove? thanks for sharing. i have one more of your poems i plan to read now.

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

Ellias Anderson Jr.

Iran, Islamic republic of
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