Youv'E Broken Her Heart Comments

can you comment my poems plz? ? .........your a great poet, -♥ marissa♥

Very realistically drawn, this picture of willful neglect and the resultant loss on both sides. If only people could inhabit each other's emotions on occasion; they'd hurt each other far less often. Well writ, Charlie.

A heart-breaking poem, with redemptive insight. One comes to realise eventually that the wrongs that have been done to you are forgotten and forgiven - the wrongs that you have done are the most painful memories, because these you cannot escape.

As they say - you don't know what you've got until you lose it. Why can't we just be happy with what we have, instead of wanting what we don't have? Do we stop living if we are just content? Linda

The price on pays for thinking the grass is greener on the other side. Tragic Patricia

Beautifully tragic.