Your World My Lord Comments

a fantastic piece of writing, thanks for sharing.. :)

awesome. has a punch that you feel till the tip of your toes. a stark portrayal of what is today's world. the ironic, contrasting apathy is chilling. epic. keep up the good work. :)

A very good poem; I like the theme of post-present reality, and the need for a change, by the Creator. Very heartfelt and sincere! Great Poem!

Nicely used words and a topic that needs a deep thoughtprocess. I liked the way you presented the whole things in a simple convo... Nice to read it :)

Your poem is excellence. I love it. Keep up to your great work.

Fine! Your poem is great! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

You have summed up perfectly the miserable state the world is in and the tragic state of humanity. This resonated with me as I often find myself feeling the same way. A very compelling piece that reaches out and touches the reader deep within their own humanity. Makes one think. Keep on creating Dipy my friend!

Simply lovely. Well expressed with a very depth meaning. Thank you for lighting my path. Wonderful art. Smooth delivery.

A very heartfelt poem, with tones of melancholia through its stanzas. The flow is smooth and natural, thus making the poem enjoyable to read. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing. I also humbly invite you to read any of my poems and review them. Best regards, ~Besa

superb very relevant......we all are in the train having compartments of corruption, low morale, absence of humanity..........a nice poem and a beautiful prayer.....

the seperation of worlds by seas and mountains leads men to forgetfullness. creating an anarchy in a hierarchy that should never have existed in the first place. forcing men to pray on the weak. a nice poem reflective of a country in need of change and equality.

Its the same old story of the {girl child}, {female foeticide}, {girl rape} and countless abuses heaped on this magnificient beautiful species ever created by God. Although I am a man, your poem certainly made my eyes moist. You do have a soft heart and this will help you to write sensitive poems such as this one.Keep writing please more. We can keep reviewing each others poems and learn more of poetry.Regards, Manohar Bhatia.

drafted exquisitely hereby...wish you the best

A nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this Poem with us. E. K. L.

Oh yes, i like this poem very much. We are on this train God is here but our minds do not tune in I ask for love but my heart is not fully open I ask for wisdom but my mind is partially closed I ask for beauty while being wilfully partially blind. Your poem provokes so many thoughts and feelings Excellent poetry

I loved your poem, Dipy. You have a definite talent, which can be honed still further. Wish you all the best for the contest. But you cannot predict anything in an Online Contest like this - which can be easily manipulated by cyber savvy poets! ! (See my poem Poem Hunter Contest Final just to have an idea of how a contest can be manipulated...)

God is a lie. Stop being childish.

Fantastic poem. The cadence and images are good.

Nice. I envy your expertise. Sehr gut. Interressant.

Very nice story, it flows beautifully. I also liked your vocabulary.