Friday, June 12, 2009

Your World Comments

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How can you lose your world, as the world is you yourself?
Why you lose your dreams
If they are so beautiful?
Why the tears fall down from your eyes
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Ria Rose
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Surya . 24 June 2009

beautifull poem.well written and expressed voted10 surya

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If they are so beautiful? Why the tears fall down from your eyes no pessimist views.. when world is at your feet umust rejoice.... no tears should roll out.... beautifukll write.....10 read mine 'Cry not'

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Eyan Desir 18 June 2009

Good write Rose Keep writing 10s

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