Wednesday, July 8, 2009

Your Words Of Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

I have seemingly missed your words of love,
Those words that were written in the sand
And erased by the first wave.
Do you remember, my love?
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Marieta Maglas
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Bill Cantrell 13 April 2024

All I can say is wow! ! A brilliant work of perfect poetry! ! !

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Sylvia Carter 14 April 2023

This is a beautiful pen, thank you for sharing

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Bill Grace 25 December 2020

A good love poem. Like the phrase 'the moan of the sand' very much.

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Khairul Ahsan 25 December 2020

Love may eventually get lost, but the kisses linger on the lips.

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David Wood 12 December 2020

Beautifully crafted poem of great depth and character. I can even feel your pain through your writings.

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Sachidananda Panda 23 July 2020

it's exquisitely woven with love and care... moments of memory carefully preserved between lines... the longing... and the disheartening reality... combined together makes it a unique composition... Thanks

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James Mclain 08 November 2019

Beautiful poem he must be a lucky man. James McLain 🎸

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Castellenas John 08 April 2019

A wonderful poem shared Marieta. I enjoyed the poem.

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Castellenas John 08 March 2019

Wonderful poetry for love.

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Indira rice 07 July 2018

So beautiful. How I adore these types of emotions. So glad this showed up unexpectedly.

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Narayanan Kutty Pozhath 30 April 2018

Very passionate words about a lost love. Beautiful lines.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 April 2018

Amazingly rendered, true mesmerizing poetry, I love Love poems, and love this more than words can tell you. You have shown your weak side, Marieta! BUT that is the truest side of all of us! A most adorable poem. A 10 for the Voting. Thank you for sharing!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 April 2018

A lovely poem, thoroughly romantic! Loved the way you have expressed words of love! I don't think it could have been penned better than what it is now in it's current form! If I find time, I would certainly revisit this beautiful piece of work to review the structure of the poem and point out further implications!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 25 March 2018

A wonderful piece of love lorn poem that amazes the heart and penetrates deep within. Thanks for the sharing.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 May 2017

Amazing words of love. Gorgeous write.

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Chinedu Dike 27 January 2017

Beautiful love poem elegantly brought forth in good diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 07 December 2016

An excellent poem of love my dear. I am really in love with this poem. ++++++++++10

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Nilima Deb 09 July 2016

a stunning write..great...loved the waves of wording..excellent.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 April 2016

I have seemingly missed your words of love, Those words that were written in the sand And erased by the first wave. Do you remember, my love? I have enclosed them hermetically With that last kiss. And, after that, Another kiss And another exotic beach And another feeling, autumnal feeling, Of another ostensible seemingly love Fulfilled my nothingness... Beautiful lines reflecting your love so deep and so rare. I want to kiss again and again Your gray-haired temple, But, in reverting, I receive only The kiss of our child... I loved these lines. Thanks for sharing this nice poem. Subhas

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 September 2015

Another kiss! With the muse of life and love. Nice piece.

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