I have seemingly missed your words of love,
Those words that were written in the sand
And erased by the first wave.
Do you remember, my love?
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A good love poem. Like the phrase 'the moan of the sand' very much.
Love may eventually get lost, but the kisses linger on the lips.
Beautifully crafted poem of great depth and character. I can even feel your pain through your writings.
it's exquisitely woven with love and care... moments of memory carefully preserved between lines... the longing... and the disheartening reality... combined together makes it a unique composition... Thanks
So beautiful. How I adore these types of emotions. So glad this showed up unexpectedly.
Very passionate words about a lost love. Beautiful lines.
Amazingly rendered, true mesmerizing poetry, I love Love poems, and love this more than words can tell you. You have shown your weak side, Marieta! BUT that is the truest side of all of us! A most adorable poem. A 10 for the Voting. Thank you for sharing!
A lovely poem, thoroughly romantic! Loved the way you have expressed words of love! I don't think it could have been penned better than what it is now in it's current form! If I find time, I would certainly revisit this beautiful piece of work to review the structure of the poem and point out further implications!
A wonderful piece of love lorn poem that amazes the heart and penetrates deep within. Thanks for the sharing.
Beautiful love poem elegantly brought forth in good diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing.
An excellent poem of love my dear. I am really in love with this poem. ++++++++++10
I have seemingly missed your words of love, Those words that were written in the sand And erased by the first wave. Do you remember, my love? I have enclosed them hermetically With that last kiss. And, after that, Another kiss And another exotic beach And another feeling, autumnal feeling, Of another ostensible seemingly love Fulfilled my nothingness... Beautiful lines reflecting your love so deep and so rare. I want to kiss again and again Your gray-haired temple, But, in reverting, I receive only The kiss of our child... I loved these lines. Thanks for sharing this nice poem. Subhas
Another kiss! With the muse of life and love. Nice piece.
All I can say is wow! ! A brilliant work of perfect poetry! ! !