Your Words Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Your Words

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Your words
Friday,15th March 2019

I kneel down to lord
and exchange a word
of hopefulness for the future
and seel merciful assurance

I saw bright hope
and allowed your cap
on my head with the label
I felt it so well

to some extent
I conceded at present
and allowed little freedom
but that worked seldom

I rethought about your words
and tried to look beyond
but it failed to work
rather gave me a jerk

your promises were hollow
and allowed me to think with an apprehension
I feared an end to the relationship
and brought an abrupt end of an excitation

Hasmukh Mehta

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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