Your words were like setting flames to fire
Waiting for the right moment and then you go and
completely break down
Your words were like a kiss from the long-lost
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This poem gives an insightful presentation of a chunk of human nature. Nice to read about the person you actually are through the Poet's Notes given above. Thanks a lot, Dear KimberLee. Your words were so paper-thin as if they would break into millions of pieces If someone were to come as far as lightly touching it
Hey there, are you new here? very glad to read your poem Your Words So true: So, don't tell me your words meant nothing Because everyone can see that they meant something.
Rich flow of thought confronting deceit, well articulated and elegantly brought forth from inner recesses of the heart with insight. Your employment of good similes to drive home your conviction is both appropriate and poetically remarkable. A well drafted poem. Thanks for sharing and do remain blessed Kimberlee.
I am so very proud of you and so sorry I was too weak to help you in your young years.