Friday, June 16, 2017

Your Words Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your words were like setting flames to fire
Waiting for the right moment and then you go and
completely break down
Your words were like a kiss from the long-lost
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Kimber Lee Iacona
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aunt jennie 10 September 2018

I am so very proud of you and so sorry I was too weak to help you in your young years.

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 June 2017

A good start from word. Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 30 June 2017

This poem gives an insightful presentation of a chunk of human nature. Nice to read about the person you actually are through the Poet's Notes given above. Thanks a lot, Dear KimberLee. Your words were so paper-thin as if they would break into millions of pieces If someone were to come as far as lightly touching it

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Abdul Basit 19 June 2017

yh his words meant something.brilliant creativity

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Soul Watcher 17 June 2017

Hey there, are you new here? very glad to read your poem Your Words So true: So, don't tell me your words meant nothing Because everyone can see that they meant something.

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Kimberlee Iacona 17 June 2017

Yes, I am new here. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Malcolm Two 17 June 2017

Lovely poem. Will be waiting for more poems by you

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Kimberlee Iacona 17 June 2017

Thank you so much. There will be more to come, don't worry.

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Chinedu Dike 16 June 2017

Rich flow of thought confronting deceit, well articulated and elegantly brought forth from inner recesses of the heart with insight. Your employment of good similes to drive home your conviction is both appropriate and poetically remarkable. A well drafted poem. Thanks for sharing and do remain blessed Kimberlee.

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