Once upon a time was a wild flower,
Living in the mountains nearest sky and stars,
Other side of world was a young man living,
Seeking for the happiness of his life.
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This is a great poem with strong metaphors. Keep writing. Strong Emotions.
Oh my God. This is beautiful. This poem has made my day.
I like the story and climax of this poem! ! ! ! Thou drew a beautiful picture here with your quill: : : Magnificient write! ! ! VIPINS
wow..this is a truly beautiful poem...made my heart warm.....i agree with what you say....and the way you expressed it..the imagery used was just beautiful -SG
Oh this poem is precious :) the way you reveal the curtain of the show, the first line it was amazing to read and end the show perfectly...the show was great, a great show by flower n the hunter :) I like this very much, the emotion such a real thing :) what a good theater hahahahaa joking :) Nice idea, wild flower is not wild as the name given..it good as you described, with a happy journey :) _Unwritten Soul
Good story, rendered poetically