Saturday, November 12, 2011

Your Wild Flower Of Mountain Comments

Rating: 4.3

Once upon a time was a wild flower,
Living in the mountains nearest sky and stars,
Other side of world was a young man living,
Seeking for the happiness of his life.
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Cristina Teodor
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Good story, rendered poetically

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Howard Savage 07 February 2016

This is a great poem with strong metaphors. Keep writing. Strong Emotions.

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Howard Savage 05 January 2016

Once upon a time is a great way to start a poem. Good job.

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 28 December 2011

Oh my God. This is beautiful. This poem has made my day.

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Vipins Puthooran 02 December 2011

I like the story and climax of this poem! ! ! ! Thou drew a beautiful picture here with your quill: : : Magnificient write! ! ! VIPINS

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Shadow Girl 25 November 2011

wow..this is a truly beautiful poem...made my heart warm.....i agree with what you say....and the way you expressed it..the imagery used was just beautiful -SG

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Unwritten Soul 25 November 2011

Oh this poem is precious :) the way you reveal the curtain of the show, the first line it was amazing to read and end the show perfectly...the show was great, a great show by flower n the hunter :) I like this very much, the emotion such a real thing :) what a good theater hahahahaa joking :) Nice idea, wild flower is not wild as the name given..it good as you described, with a happy journey :) _Unwritten Soul

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Cristina Teodor

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