* Your Whispers * Comments
Your whispers I heard
Even though in a crowd
From your sorrows of silence
Rose my song of love
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lovely i enjoyéd it thank u invite u to send ur precious comments on my poems too
'like zephyr so gentle' your words always touch me and it stays timeless... 10++++ clicked but it didnt appear becoz of techno problem.
I just took a chance to read any of your poems and it was my choice. I've gone for a right choice. This poem is too good to touch and penetrate a heart whom the expressions are meant. Last line is so nice.... I swear From the depths of my heart There shall not be another Another Majnu Like how thou art I enjoyed the poem. Gautam
A vote of appreciation for one of a kind majnu. His whispers you heard from which rose the song of your love. Mission accomplished for you, dear majnu. Fascinating indeed Anju.
not a majnu like him and a laila like you the cup's full to the brim and the love seems true may god bless the laila and majnu....
LIKE JOHN DONNE, YOU CREATE A HARMONY BETWEEN TWO HEARTS. AGAIN YOU SHOW YOUR UNIQUE QUALITY AND I GIVE YOU 10/10.
Beautiful start to this poem to hold the reader who cannot let go you are the perfect wordsmith forging even wonderful whispers ++10 regards
Two souls in tune and the music is beautiful.10/10.Anjali. Love, Sandra
am in turmoil am in distress may no longer want to carry on for my life is just a boring mess what my hope if not thy promise the promise of the promising meeting.....
This is a beautifully expressed write my lovely, your words blended with the narrative tone really does lift this piece to a whole new level.....Stunning work sweetheart........Lovely to be back reading your works again my friend.
What Did Ye Know The one knowing not the secrete How shall then the beloved of self Didst to the sun did point the finger Didst someone told what night was like What desert of love was like what thirst meant What wine was when her eyes were goblet When risen was the moon to sunset When prayer was on the stone step of that door Reciting the only chant was her name Let the compass of my life be the eyes Let the one be like the halo silver Of colors that the dreams to dare Nay the narrations visions are seen Who on love has bidden life dear Who then no one shall know his love Majnun not then what did ye know .............You have written a lovely poem. I take it to my fav list.10 and much more for you.
There are whispers divine in mind's jungle of trees and vines that speaks gently, as gentle zephyr to the man rolling in wordly mire tune your mind to that unearthly voice and surely your soul would start to rejoice.....a good write...10+++....
Beautiful love poem, so heartfelt, thanks for sharing 10
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7/28/2025 4:00:40 AM # 1.0.0
great awesome and very nice.......