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</>My heart beats for the ones always out of reach,
Falling into this love, I'm now knee deep,
Slowly sinking into the waters, which you call love,
I only feel asphyxiation as this love pushes its way down my throat,
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This poem is very good and really true..that's the sad part. It's kinda like my poem, Your Kiss Burns
Such a strong poem. I too have felt sufficated as I love those too far away for me to be with.
This is very emotional... Can the water also be tears cried out of disappointment? Lines 5 & 6, you wrote brilliant!
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8/7/2025 1:17:32 AM # 1.0.0
Awesome, more people should feel this way. Really great you have the courage to get away from someones' suffocating will. Good for you to have such wisdom! Thanks for sharing :)